This piece of work is really amazing. i especially the fragment wall and the complex strcuture of the biulding.The coloring is also simple and tidy, which give people an impression of the modern society, quick and tidy.
however, personally i think the upground and the underground strcutures are so similer to each other that make the whole picture too complicated.
Your work is amazing Hang, especially the design of the gallery is innovative. It looks like a mosaic. But I think there is too many lines that divide a facade of the building. I can clearly see what you are trying to show, but too many lines are not helping it. By the way, those lines looks like cracks as well.. Nice.
Wow! Your design was holy great! It fitted really well to your words which were chaos and luxury.I can see from your work of design that you really paid a lot of effort working on these fantastic lines and shapes.I wonder how you will orientate the space inside. This model really has many potentials to dig into.I am looking forward to your developed model.
The above ground studio looks very intricate and chaotic which is good because it totally relates to your word. Even though it looks a bit messy, I still consider it to be a very good design - the design is very orignal and it just stands out from most of the students' works. I like it how you can make something so spectacular out of simple shapes ilke triangles, squares, and some simple polygons. However, I would focus more on making the underground exhibition space different than the above ground studio because when I first looked at it, I thought the below ground was part of the above ground. Good job though!
This piece of work is really amazing. i especially the fragment wall and the complex strcuture of the biulding.The coloring is also simple and tidy, which give people an impression of the modern society, quick and tidy.
回复删除however, personally i think the upground and the underground strcutures are so similer to each other that make the whole picture too complicated.
Your work is amazing Hang, especially the design of the gallery is innovative. It looks like a mosaic. But I think there is too many lines that divide a facade of the building. I can clearly see what you are trying to show, but too many lines are not helping it.
回复删除By the way, those lines looks like cracks as well.. Nice.
此评论已被作者删除。
回复删除Wow! Your design was holy great! It fitted really well to your words which were chaos and luxury.I can see from your work of design that you really paid a lot of effort working on these fantastic lines and shapes.I wonder how you will orientate the space inside. This model really has many potentials to dig into.I am looking forward to your developed model.
回复删除The above ground studio looks very intricate and chaotic which is good because it totally relates to your word. Even though it looks a bit messy, I still consider it to be a very good design - the design is very orignal and it just stands out from most of the students' works. I like it how you can make something so spectacular out of simple shapes ilke triangles, squares, and some simple polygons. However, I would focus more on making the underground exhibition space different than the above ground studio because when I first looked at it, I thought the below ground was part of the above ground. Good job though!
回复删除